Our new netbooks

30 July 2012

Walt: Write an exciting narrative using descriptive words and an exciting starting.

Dear Mum
It was such a beautiful day because we got our netbooks given to us in the school hall. I didn’t expect the decorations when we got our netbooks, I had goose bumps because I was excited. We watched a movie that was  
about getting our netbooks. I enjoyed receiving the netbook that I got.

The netbook is going to help me so I can look up on things on the Internet. I will do my school work on the netbook now and get better at using the netbook.

Thank you again Mum. 
Your son,
Patara.